Working+Thesis

The potential energy of wind power can be a leading source in a greener future, by saving fossil fuels, being a renewable energy, and //consistently staying the same price.// //(...and providing a stable market price.) ?//

Mr. Martin, this is what i feel my thesis will be, i am not sure how a good way to word the end of the sentence, but i think these three reasons are a good base to start my project with.

//I think you are off to a good start. I agree, the end of your statement needs some work. Have you already found some research supporting stable market price? If so, I think this is a great point.// Give this wording some thought...

//The potential of harnessing wind power can be a leading source of energy and provide a greener future by conserving fossil fuels, serving as a renewable source, and providing a stable market price.//

Final Working Thesis: The potential use of wind power can be a leading source of energy in a greener future by reducing the use of fossil fuels, serving as a renewable source of energy, and relieving the economic stress of gasoline.